In the first essay the smoothness in which it flowed for me personally and the fact that I was able to convey the moments clearly enough to leave out further descriptions.
The opportunity to write in more than one voice at the same time also allowed me to quench something within myself while writing.
For revision I would work on separating it into a variety of different topics. I would try to figure out in depth how to convey clarity with fewer yet more poignant words.
I would also be interested in writing entire stories from the perspective of the analytical voice that appeared in the Italic lettering.
In terms of content I’d like to find away to share more personal and depth filled experiences in a clear and except-able manner that would hold and or attract the audience.
In terms of craft I will continue to not over reach my visions and learn how to become better, one simple word at a time. I’d like my voice to become clear enough that people will realize it is in line with my speaking and not a grammatical error.
For this next essay I will simply try to do what I did but more evolved and deeper.
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